Need some sleep - Toxic Exit - Hip Hop

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by JoeCarlse, Jan 24, 2013.

  1. JoeCarlse

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    Yeah i know this is a DnB forum but there is something that doesnt quite seem right on my latest beat... Can anyone help?
     
  2. Silent Impact

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    The kick is clashing with your sub bass.Get rid of some lower freqs on kick, or choose a better sample.
    And the sub notes doesn't seem to fit with the melodies at some points.
    Also the pad thingy doesn't fit in.
    The melody sample is good.