I agree with Rorschach with the needing some warmth, I feel like a low passed reese would do it, having said that it might darken the vibe but nothing wrong with experimenting. Maschinstom makes a good point with the speech, would be better off using it to bring the track in then let the tune speak for itself (sorry that sounded a bit cheesy lol). Other than those things it's defo on the right track.