need some feedback [wip]

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by groelle, Apr 29, 2009.

  1. groelle

    groelle Well-Known Member

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    did this on a messy session last night, its only a 4 bar loop as of yet, but i guess u get the idea ;)

    just wanted to know if i should keep working at it or not.

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/593507838913755d/


    note: its done by scratch, no presets or samples used.
     
  2. Sammy Dexcell

    Sammy Dexcell Stop editing my profile Smarty!

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    yea this needs loads more work yet, the bass is a bit ear piercing tbh, an needs sub an mids less highs, i can go on an on about wat to do but then this tune wont be urs lol, just keep workin at it. Have patience before u post stuff on here, an if u get bored just move on to the next project....once u got most the tune done then post up ;)
     
  3. sotalex

    sotalex man your battlestations

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    yup yup was just about to say this aswell, more sub, maybe with a lil flanger/flangus. break sounds good, could use a lil bit more percussion.
     
  4. groelle

    groelle Well-Known Member

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    thx for listening and feedback tho ;)