need some feedback [wip]

[groelle]

did this on a messy session last night, its only a 4 bar loop as of yet, but i guess u get the idea

just wanted to know if i should keep working at it or not.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/593507838913755d/


note: its done by scratch, no presets or samples used.

 

[Sammy Dexcell]

yea this needs loads more work yet, the bass is a bit ear piercing tbh, an needs sub an mids less highs, i can go on an on about wat to do but then this tune wont be urs lol, just keep workin at it. Have patience before u post stuff on here, an if u get bored just move on to the next project....once u got most the tune done then post up

 

[sotalex]

yea this needs loads more work yet, the bass is a bit ear piercing tbh, an needs sub an mids less highs, i can go on an on about wat to do but then this tune wont be urs lol, just keep workin at it. Have patience before u post stuff on here, an if u get bored just move on to the next project....once u got most the tune done then post up

yup yup was just about to say this aswell, more sub, maybe with a lil flanger/flangus. break sounds good, could use a lil bit more percussion.

 

[groelle]

thx for listening and feedback tho