Need some feedback/advice

Solace

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So, I'm working on a track for a while now, but i don't really know how work out my intro. Without the small silent pause there is now, it sounds a bit awkward, but I'm not sure if it's any good now.
Also, I'm not sure on the length, I don't know if it's alright, or needs some trimming (or more variation.. If so, any ideas?)
If you have any general remarks please say so, any advice is welcome ^^

And i am aware of the silent bit in the beginning, it's there for a reason atm, it will be gone when finished

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fdeltadnb%2Fid-unfinished
 
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