Need some fedback please on my 1st tune . . .. (dubstep tho)

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  1. MisterB

    MisterB New Member

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    Right , basically this is my 1st attempt at making a tune, ive kept it basic (tune im workin on now is gettin layered up alot lot more). . . . .

    just want some feedback , cheers , Dale

    http://soundcloud.com/dale_b_dubstep/hadouken-dubstep

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  2. T Leaf

    T Leaf Neighbourhood Sickhead

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    them kicks at the intro are huge :) 808's?
    didnt like the laugh effect, sagat has got a sicker laugh in the original SF2 - New Challengers - use that.
    being a street fighter fan (like massively) i obviously love the samples with a huge bias there.
    The bass is pretty slimey, add a bit of variation too, play with that background ripping sound more and you could be on to something here.
     
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    yeah mate ,cheers for the feedback . .. its hard gettin feedback from mates cos its never gonna be as unbiased . . . im defo thinkin about adding some stuff in but gotta find the pallet, left it on an usb somewhere ,all the SF samples are on there too :(
     
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    Hat's arent really doing it for me ...so ovious and timing is strange also uve choosen a clap instead of a snare it's kind of weak (Btw these are personal opions)

    But wobble's sound alright keep at it ;)
     
  5. MisterB

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    All feedback is apreciated, I ain't expecting a lot frm my 1st attempt, jus want some opinions & pointers so can improve !!
     
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    sup MisterB,

    I think soundcloud might be buggin out, cant hear any audio at the moment(is anybody else having this problem or are the gremlins just in my pc today???)

    I will check again later buddy...

    be easy..
     
  8. MisterB

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    It was bein tempremental yesterday with me but its workin ok now , cool mate
     
  9. MisterB

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    bumpy bumpy
     
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