Need help with production

[Eviction]

I don't know did i post this thing in the right section of the forum but okay. I'm been doing/producing dnb like 1 month already. And i have a few demos( http://www.zone.ee/predistor/My music/ ) but i have a problem also. When im done with the intro then i dont know what should i do for the next. Right now I'm stuck with this song http://www.zone.ee/predistor/My music/Eviction - Unknown[Demo].mp3 because i don't know what should i do or where should i go. So can someone give me some tips or hints

 

[MARLZTAH]

clicked the link and it was telling me i need to register i think

was all foreign

can you upload it somewhere else?

 

[Eviction]

http://rapidshare.com/files/52140206/Eviction_-_Unknown_Demo_.mp3.html
here you go.:O

 

[sook]

havent had a chance to listen but...
try writing your tunes from the drop...
then write an intro to suit the tune..

 

[vickvega]

would agree i go from the drop to the 2nd make intro then the outro
seems to flow better that way imo