need help with my tunes

[jayda0121]

i hav been makin dnb about 4months ago but i still cant get it theres something missin from my tracks iv got a few songs up on www.myspace.com/jaydadnb
if any 1 cud teka luk n id apreciate any advice ov wat i need to do with the tunes
thanks alot
jayda

 

[sotalex]

layer your kicks and snares, use more percusion and breaks
work on you bass!! sounds a bit sloppy and childish...

 

[H*product]

lots of practice. check out the tutorials on youtube, chase and status, sub focus etc. good luck.

and check my beats out if you got a min,

www.myspace.com/heavyweightproduct

safe

 

[jayda0121]

ye cheers iv bin given that advice about layering my drums an that and tried to do this in a new track
just uploaded it onma myspace let me kno ifya fink ders any improvement kl