Need fresh ears

[Bass Character]

I sat down at 7pm and started playing around in cubase, now its 11:30 and I've listened to the same loop for so long I don't know what's what.

Can anyone take a listen to what I've bounced down and tell me what's wrong/right with it?

Cheers

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?nknyhogmgkv

 

[KEMZ]

ez, try putting some gaps in there, here and there maybe? pads of some sort or even other sounds following the bline rhythm chopped up and mangled

i like it mate, neat idea, get some filters in there!