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[soziblewuup]

1st track in DnB, come from dubstep background. Please give advise, would be greatly appreciatedx.

http://soundcloud.com/carbonjdm/carbon-cavern

 

[Oria]

not my cup of tea musically. mixdown snare and bass drum get a bit lost, 'bass' is overpowering at times, high hats are too high in the mix, drum pattern needs some variation.

 

[soziblewuup]

Thanks for your feedback