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Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by crossie, Nov 9, 2007.

  1. crossie

    crossie New Member

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    not in the white noise style but peeps can help me by givin this clip an earful and lettin us know what they think any feedback well appreciated

    http://www.megaupload.com/?d=4QZMRTRP
     
  2. logikz

    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    bigger kick and snare would be good, roll out the structure a bit more (make the beat more sparse in the beginning, escalate as things go along), deeper bass. the nightmares on wax (or is it deckwrecka?) sample sounds awful familiar in this context. pretty sweet i thought.
     
  3. crossie

    crossie New Member

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    cheers man will take your advice on board

    back to the lab again
     
  4. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    drums cud be a bit heavier maybe another layer or sumfin.
    bass is cool tho keep it up!(y)
     
  5. crossie

    crossie New Member

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    more feedback in 3 hours than 2 days on doa this site kicks ass lol

    cheers dnb forum