Drum & Bass Need feedback on Liquid.

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Basstex, Sep 30, 2016.

  1. Basstex

    Basstex New Member

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    So about 5 months ago I posted my first liquid dnb song:


    This is what I did about a few weeks ago:


    And this is what I've been doing the past week:



    I would really like to hear your feedback on my recent songs, but don't judge me too much, I'm still a beginner...lol.
     
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  2. Basstex

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    BTW, the 3rd one is not finished yet.
     
  3. Mentor & Moore

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    Hey man! Good progress so far! The drums need some more punch though. Try using parallel compression and put the levels of the snare, kick higher in the mix so they really 'smash you in the face' ;D and maybe try using some more melodies to make it variate some more:) The liquid vibe is present though it's nice to listen to! Keep up the good work!:D

     
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    Tomorrow is really nice! I can't decide if i think the vocals are a bit cheesy or not, but apart from that really like it and love the strings. Think the track's arranged nicely and has a nice flow. Drums are nicely balanced too. It's coming along nicely, keep writing the tunes!
     
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    Thanks man! :D