Need feedback on a tune, wip

[Phractal]

hi guys, this is my first post here, and I'm liking the forum so far! I have been spending a lot of time on a drum & bass track, but have hit a creative block, and though coming to a forum like this would be a good way of getting constructive criticism and feedback.
would be grateful if any of you could have a listen. thanks.

http://soundcloud.com/phractal/neuro-wip

 

[Phat_Sam]

yeah man... god ideas. just need to start refining. make everything a bit punchier in the drums. lovin the atmospheric pads. in terms of the bass... ya need to make the 'warp' of the bassline affect all of the bassline not just the high ends. hope that makes sense

nice effort though

 

[IbbyDnB]

what Phat_sam said, refine refine refine! dont acept anything but the best you can possably do even it it meens leaveing it a month or few to finish! and try made the bass have more in terms of harmonics in the mid range, try make it sound warmer! soudning good though!