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Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Mentor & Moore, Jul 15, 2016.

  1. Mentor & Moore

    Mentor & Moore Member

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    Hey guys!

    Last year I made this track. I know it's not dnb but I was wondering what you guys think of it ? :)
    Comment/feedback always welcome!! :)

    https://soundcloud.com/mentormoore/
    sundaychill/s-kY3lb

    (it's a private link, just paste the two pieces together:) )
     
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  2. CuriosityKilledTheCat

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    Hey man. it's a very nice and chill track, I liked it. The piano and the pads work well together I find. There's a few things that I think could improve the track. The snare sound a bit "lowpassed" imo, I think you can give it a little boost in the high frequencies. Also I'd love to hear the drums being syncopated, I think it'd give the track a smoother feeling. again that's just my opinion though :razz:
     
  3. Mentor & Moore

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    Hey man! thanks for your comment and feedback! :D
     
  4. OaT

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    Syncopated drums are the shit dude! Absolutely my cup of tea.
     
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  5. Mentor & Moore

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    Thanks man!!! :D
     
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    maschinistom Active Member

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    hello M&M, i'm a bit late here but i agree with the other dudes. nice chilly summer track, like it a lot! nice melody and overall vibe. good to see you try something different with the drums. maybe adding some vocal hooks would complete the track? cheers to belgium! :)
     
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  7. Mentor & Moore

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    Hey thanks man! :D yeah I agree vocals would be great but it's finding them that's the hard part haha!:D Thanks for your comment man really appreciate it!