Need Critique Please

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by IV4, Aug 10, 2011.

  1. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Hi
    I have been working on this one way to long and I have change it so many times, I wanted to run it by some of you before I give up.
     
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    Not really feeling those vocal chops ;P Bass is sounding cool but i think u need more sub.
     
  3. subprime

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    Didn't really like the wide reverb sound on the snare, I reckon with that bass running it would sound better with a more snappy snare.

    Really like the bass line. In my headphones there's enough low end. When it goes high it could perhaps get a bit more saturated and dirty and filtered?

    Like the build up, Like the little drum fill before the drop.

    The chopped vocal is a fairly strong 'flavour' for sure!

    Cool tune.
     
  4. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Thanks fishy I am not feeling the vocal chops either. I just want something, anything in the higher frequencies to be placed on top of the song. Any suggestions?

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    Thanks subprime
    Two more things I have been insecure about. I will try to find another snare. Never felt I got it right. And I am glad you like the drum fill before the drop because again I just never felt like it was right.
    As for the bass I just recectly learn from neo-mind and sid-fidla how to separate frequencies. To give them(my bass) that little bit extra touch. However, I think it is to late for me to go back and add the touch in. Mostly because I am a long way away from being good at it and knowing what to do.