Need Advice & Help with DnB


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Hey there. I'm not good at producing DnB, and I was wondering what I would need to do in order to make my songs in the future much better. I've only had seven to eight months in the music production field too, so I still need a lot of experience. Here's two songs that I've made.

This one is the first song, and it was going to be entered into TSA (Technology Student Association) competitions, but I scrapped it. This one is a lot older, and it's not as good.

This is my second one. It's not exactly DnB but it has the tempo of DnB and some DnB elements. This one is my latest track and it's my best so far.

Please leave feedback, as it would help me out a lot and I would be grateful. Thank you! :)