Nebula (120BPM)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by unmd, Aug 25, 2014.

  1. unmd

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    Ello!

    A little number I've finished today. Give me some criticism! :twisted:

     
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  2. smoothassilk

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    The way it flows and the variations are just right imo, which is one of the hardest things to get right.

    Unusually for this forum, I feel your sound design is letting you down a bit here. Bass is a little weak and simplistic. Get some modulation going on, and layer a clean sine at the very low end to keep it sounding weighty, if you haven't got one already.
    Also I think your main snare could use some boosting at the high end.
     
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    Like it... the high end lead seems a bit prominent, but bass and drums good and chimes sound noice.
     
  4. unmd

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    I won't work on this tune any more. I was trying to do something different to dnb in order to test my musical skills.

    I agree that the bass is simple. There's A TINY BIT of filter and chorus automation in it. :p

    Thanks for good words tho!