Neatsu - Dark Matter (Intelligent/Minimal DnB)

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  1. Neatsu

    Neatsu Neatsu

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    Hey guys, wasup :)

    Been working on this tune for quite some time and I am not sure what more could be done to improve it. I would really appreciate if you could give it a listen and maybe recommend on possible modifications to make the track sound better:

    http://soundcloud.com/neatsu/neatsu-dark-matter

    Criticism is more than welcome as usual.

    Cheers!
     
  2. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Haha, I recently posted up a track with the exact same name! Great minds think alike and all that
     
  3. dj cluster

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    nice intro, nice drums, pretty cool track!
     
  4. Neatsu

    Neatsu Neatsu

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    @ Mr Fletch - I just listened to your Dark Matter, mate! Great tune :)
    @ dj cluster - thx mate, I appreciate the feedback!
     
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    nice beats man :) interesting stuff! i love minimal :D
     
  7. Neatsu

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    Thx guys, I'm glad you like the track :)
     
  8. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Sorry I never got chance to offer feedback earlier, was kinda in a rush.

    Anyway......lovin the atmospheric intro, really nice and moody....absolutely beautiful drum work, really clean. I return the comment you posted on my track.....this is exactly my sort of style and I love it.

    Out of curiousity, what DAW do you use? maybe we should collab?
     
  9. d-low

    d-low I know you got soul

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    loving that sweeping pad dude, beautiful!
     
  10. Neatsu

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    @ Mr Fletch - thx so much man, I am glad you like the tune. :) I usually work in FL Studio 7 and I am still struggling to master a track in a decent way (I suck at mastering). Collaboration would be great! What is the DAW you use?
    @ d-low - cheers mate! thx for the listen!
     
  11. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Ahh, I used to use FL8 but recently made the switch to Ableton Live 8. And it's well worth the switch!
     
  12. Neatsu

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    @ Mr Fletch - no worries, bro :) I haven't used Ableton but I'll definitely check it out.

    Anyone else care to comment, guys?
     
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    this is very nice mate, love the atmosphere and vibe.
    beats crispy as mate!
    id possibly just add more of a bassline to top it off, maybe beef the drums a little to give them more presence in the mix, otherwise its sweet
     
  14. Neatsu

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    Cheers Labrat! Thx for the recommendations, I will look into the basslines and drum patterns for further improvements. :)
     
  15. Rips

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    yeah liking it, I think a few bass pans would be nice, not necessarily low frequecy just maybe some mid range sweepy bass noises!
     
  16. Neatsu

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    Yeah, bro I hear you :) I started producing the track with the idea that I wanted the bass to mimic resonance sounds but it seems that this could be improved a little bit. Thx for the listen!
     
  17. underspawn

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    Not rly my cup of tea, but the drums and the atmosphere are aweeeesome.
     
  18. Neatsu

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    Thx bro, I appreciate the feedback!
     
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    wicked track more bassss tho
     
  20. Neatsu

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    Thx mate! I'll try to add a more pronounced bassline for further improvements.