the intro is very nice but, you still need to work on the mixdown. The sub is way too high in the mix and these drums need a lot of more work (not about the sound but the use of the samples).
Also the song has almost no changes in the 4 minutes, try to put a noticeable bridge and some bits to keep the listener interested.
Agree, nice intro but mixdown could do with some work. I like the drums, nice acoustic feel to them. Trumpet is a nice touch. Maybe add some release to the sub so the notes to end so abruptly. Definitely not finished tho! Keep at it!
Thank you for listening to the track! I definitely agree with your criticism but I just felt like posting the track eventhough I knew it had flaws here and there. Will work additionally on the sub and the mixdown and as Neomind recommended on the variety of samples so that it would not sound boring.