NautilusSix-(my "first" track)(comment/critique!)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Nautilus, Mar 3, 2010.

  1. Nautilus

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  2. Catsel

    Catsel Well-Known Dismember

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    sound pretty good! could do wiv a bit more punch yanno? imagine this bein playin at a club.. its not really gunna work.. so cud do with bein a bit more of the same..

    for 3 weeks, its pretty good. i hope u understand what i mean.
     
  3. Nautilus

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    Yeah, I was aiming for basic cohesiveness in this song, as well as a beat that didn't sound like trash. I'm working on a new track that is more central in theme, and a bit more "intense".
     
  4. DJ Labrynth

    DJ Labrynth Reppin the 90's

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    Considerring your experience, not too bad. My advice is to read as much as you can about the craft, watch videos, and keep spending your time making music. Each track is a new lesson, so get to work!
     
  5. Nautilus

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    thanks mate, playing around with fl is one of the most entertaining things i've done in years. I'm working as hard as I can to learn between classes, hopefully I can learn enough by the time summer hits so I can put in some real time and dedication.

    also got a real keyboard coming in next week instead of using my typing keyboard :p
     
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  6. Psyrus

    Psyrus Give it some bastard

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    Yeah man youve definately got the funk, now you just need to find the fury and your set :)