NASTY DUBSTEP - Need feedback on a track!

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  1. Dirtklod

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    Cool tune, but in my opinion could do with some more sub bass or a beefing upof the main bass :)
     
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    intro isnt that great with the obvious presets going on.
    but that wobble is kerazy! i like it, you need to beef the bass up a bit, only listening on poor headphones id say u need more sub.

    is that wobble just LFO automation goin crazy?
     
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    Yeah, great wobble. I find it difficult to create wobbles with LFO automation tbh
     
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    in what DAW?
     
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    Trust me, there's plenty of sub! What are you listening on Dafo?

    And yeah the changes in the wobbles is just LFO automation.
     
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    I use FL 8 - I'm pretty new to production tbh...and I'm listening through headphones so that may be the reason for it :) They're pretty good headphones though
     
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    the bass sounds like its all midrange tbh, need more low end and poss more top end for the filth sound.
     
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    i use fl its the easiest daw going mate, hit me up if u got any questions!
     
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    It's a pretty deep sub. Only bigger systems can push it out properly really.

    Maybe you both mean it needs sorta more bass depth than full on sub? Coz if that is what you mean then I do agree. Just wanted a pretty clear sound to the track though.
     
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    i can understand the big system sub thing cuz its hard to detect on my own tunes on headphones, but yeah even if u add a bit of chorus to the bass it wud cut through more to give a more harder edge to it, but im not saying its bad dont get me wrong....
     
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    Oh I get you now! I've got a seperate sub bass instrument to the wobble rather than adding bass onto the wobble.
    Thanks, I'll take that into consideration.
     
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    there is definetly sub bass but even that could use a bit of a push ur missing every thing inbetween 80 hz an 350hz its the top mid range of the bass thats not there its mainly high end an sub im hearin tbh nice tune tho good ideas nice beefy kick n snare aswell
     
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    sub bass maybe to low bro, sounds like its coming more from the left, have you a reverb on it?????? ive got some pretty fucking mean phones bro they pick up everything,

    apart from the bass, its a pretty cool track. drums need to be brought forward they seem to linger in the back ground a lil.



    now you have had a bita feedback, i assume you will be giving other people some as well ? ;>)
     
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    cheers mate will bear that in mind :)
     
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    Cheers for the advice, but no there is no reverb on the sub and it's definitely in the centre!

    And I've just checked out your tunes on myspace man. They're absolutely sick! Proper nice production.
    But I can't say I can give any critical comments. I've only been producing for just over a year so can't really make any sorta in-depth observations.
     
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    cheers for the comments bro