MyLow- Perseverance (WIP)- (need for mirrors, alix perez influence)

[endless_limits]

http://soundcloud.com/mylow-dnb/perseverance-wip-v2

i need to do abit more replacing, some more mastering. also adding more stuff and going to be fixing the repetition in the middle area

any feedback or suggestions? it would be greatly appreciated

i am using studio one v2

 

[Nucleoid]

You could bring some more dynamic in the song by adding some breaks, fx and sweeps here and there. Also bring up the synth, it's pretty soft now

If this is your first song: not bad mate! ^^

 

[endless_limits]

yeah. i need to do abit more mastering and adding vocal clips. need to and some effects and that. and fix the repetition half way through so its not as dull.

first track ive got close to around finishing. i want cubase so bad but using studio one atm

 

[Nucleoid]

I'm not trying to promote cracking stuff, but I've got a Cubase 5 up and running.. it's not that hard to install either to be honest, and i can know cuz im a noob with that stuff

Anyway try to make some subtle changes to the elements when the song progresses, that helps removing the dull repetition ^^