Drum & Bass mykono5 - Division of Zero (First dark Drum & Bass I ever made)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by mykono5, Jan 14, 2013.

  1. mykono5

    mykono5 Aru R.

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    I just tried making dark-ish Drum & Bass after a long time sticking with Liquids... please tell me how good is my first dark track :)

    Though it's only the preview on the SoundCloud. The BUY link redirects to the full download link (No money needed :nurr_nur: )

    Please tell me the things I need to improve, as because (again) this is my first dark DNB track :)
     
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  2. Silent Impact

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    I think those swooshes and wooshes :D are too loud and there's too much of them.
    Drop needs more punch man.See ur swooshie sound ruins the drop.Cut the tail off right before the drop and it should be much better.
    But it's not bad for first try.The bass sounds enough dark.
     
  3. Mr_DnB

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    Yes I agree with Silent Impact. The " swooshes" are a little bit too loud however they don't ruin the Drop I think. In my opinion they make the Drop very interesting! During the main loop the swooshes have way to much high end. It even hurt my ears.

    Apart from that i really like the track and would I would play it definitely at the next gig ;)

    Please give me a feedback to my first DnB Track:
    http://dnbforum.com/showthread.php/155838-Drum-and-Bass-Realize-It-Pouderville
     
  4. MrMush

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    drums are racey and i like em alot.. sounds like a rumbler... not much melody but its dope for what it is