my two first drum and bass tracks

[hardmode]

Hey! made my first drum and bass tracks too, please check them out and let me know what you think?
1st

https://soundcloud.com/itsmoonman%2Fmoonman-sand

2nd

https://soundcloud.com/itsmoonman%2Fmoonman-siren

 

[elmaruk]

I'll be honest...

1st Track - Not really feeling this one at all to be fair so i won't comment.

2nd - Track - Feelin this big time, the intro and build up could do with some work but what you have there for the drop is bangin. really like the rolling feel you got going there. I think some really techy synths in there would work a treat.

Nice one.

 

[~CriticalWaves~]

Not to bad man the second tune is def much better than the first good work for 4 ure first two though!

 

[circle six]

yeh, second track got a nice beat, sounds nicely eq'd and the percussion in the back rolls nicely. got some really nice sounds in the build up to the second half. be good to have a bit more in the track as a whole, some hooks or a few more techy sounds

 

[hardmode]

thank you for your opinions, i totally agree about the 2nd track. The intro could be a lot greater and some techy synths would fit well