MY TRACK SEMI COMPLETE - DOING MY HEAD IN!!!!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by mistasfx, Jun 26, 2012.

  1. mistasfx

    mistasfx MISTA SFX

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    Right im gonna have to move onto something else coz this is sappin the life out of me hahaha

    https://soundcloud.com/mistasfx/nightmares-v1

    that is it til now, gonna come back to it n tweak but let me know what u think.

    Thanks
     
  2. jimjimjim

    jimjimjim oldskool

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    easy man - like this.
    i think tho that the main bass riff is too repatative for the track - it doesnt leave you anywhere to go with it - if u c what i mean.
    maybe after 8 bars or so after the drop double time the bass (or bits of it) - keep that bass more evolving or somethin.
    good tune tho man
    peace
     
  3. Salvus

    Salvus Member

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    This is gnarly mate, very. Got a modern hazard feeling about it.
    Agree with jim about doing something more with the (main) bass after a certain period.
    Sick tho mate. Naughty sample as well...well naughty
     
  4. mistasfx

    mistasfx MISTA SFX

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    thats why im giving it a rest, startin to hate it now lol thanks tho :)
     
  5. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Are you euthanizing this track? Some times it must be done. I think you should just leave it alone and later you might want to come back to it. Its not that bad.