!!!!!!My Second Upload! darkish bass roller PLEASE LOOK!!!!!!!

[vexx]

been on this for a while, hit a bit of a rut. comments/constructive critisim/ BUT NO BEEF. im still a newbie


http://soundcloud.com/user5285078/tracks

 

[Steezyfosheezy]

its sounding good dude. maybe add a bit more progression/variation throughout.

 

[Fishy:)]

Sounding good man