My remix of Forever Lost by God is an Astronaut [Drum&Bass]

[The Third.]

This is my first DnB track, so all feedback & advice is welcome.
Link : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VNmh3bQqDW4

Ok, i took yalls advice & redid the track some.
Newest version : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4KrLhdQxzYk

I'll also be sure to return feedback, but as i said im new to dnb so i may not be of much help, lol.

 

[Nacon]

I really like how it sounds, but it might be just me or, the drums are a little bit low compared to the other stuff?

Really nice atmosphere in it in my opinion though...

 

[Energize]

Totally agree with Nacon, some editing on the drums would be woth it.
But still nice work mate, sounds good to me!

 

[VerbumSapiens]

A liquid funk-type bass could make the beat a lot better.

 

[The Third.]

I added a redid version & tried to fix some of what was wrong with the first version.

And what exactly is a liquid funk bass? Could anyone point me to a tutorial on how to make that?