My Liquid drum and bass demo track :) critism welcomed

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Evok, Jun 26, 2010.

  1. Evok

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    i like the idea, the bassline and vocals work well together, the constant switching between different, very obvious sample cd breaks is a little annoying imo, a weird structure,im guessing thats cause its a demo. not bad though man, maybe needs some attention to the mix down and eq.

    you should prob get rid of the youtube link, it makes the song sound really bad, drums especially.
     
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    Not bad, the production quality is very good, everything is clear. The bass could be a few db louder maybe.

    But the synth gets somehow ugly when the vocal is playing, maybe they're off key or something. The drum switching is good but needs more consistency, like longer periods of one sound etc.

    Still a good 'clip'. Cant say much of structure....