My latest tune...

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by D.J.Tone-Def, Aug 10, 2003.

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    Oh come on then...!!!
     
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    nIce techy b line, good long build up in the track, atmospherics on it sound crisp to. The breakdown is very interesting, the vocals give a very spook feeling to that bit and it builds like a bitch, could do with a clearer drop though, which is the only think i would change right around 4.50 when it gets going again.

    If you got a high qual version send it my way man, big up :)
     
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    no problem if you ever want me to host for you give me a shout...
     
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    Cheers man,that's good of ya!
     
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    Re: Re: My latest tune...

    Not really feeling it. The main riff is kind of contorted in a bad sorta way, so I can't see this working on the floor. There are too many different breaks and drum sounds, and they all aren't quantized together so they are a bit off-time. The bass levels are inconsistent, and the track really doesn't seem to go anywhere.

    On the upside, cheers for trying to find your own sound. Maybe work on keeping the track more focused would help.