My latest b-side for notes and thoughts. thank you.

[PeriodicDisturbance]

Is the sub bass on this acceptable? Any thoughts greatly appreciated again, thank you and I will not bum rush the forum with 2 tracks in a row like this until maybe two weeks who knows or until the next time i feel like i was creative and need help.

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B_wIV9EDDlx4WV9DeGdsdnZGZ3c

 

[gregorkarbowski]

not bad at all but the second synth bassline don`t know how to call it but it doesn`t sit tight in the mix look into it