My latest attempt..

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Kaz1983, May 14, 2010.

  1. Kaz1983

    Kaz1983 Member

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    OK so everyone knows, I know it's not finished and that also I'm not Original Sins other brother. :D

    This is my second jump up, it wasnt meant to be but just turned out that way -

    http://soundcloud.com/navy-blue/faces-of-war

    Fire away, I'll take cover...
     
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  2. Jolly Jumpa

    Jolly Jumpa Dj Synergex

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    Beat/drums are decent. A little too limited/compressed. Orchestra seems a little weak; add a few reverbs/delays on there too. Vocal is a little loud and a slight nudge of a long decayed reverb. Bass = none :( PUMP IT! Effects are a little loud.
    Jump up aint my cup of tea so it's harder for me to judge, but if those suggestions IMO it would of sounded a little better :)
    Keep it up,
    Steve (aka Dj Synergex)
     
  3. Kaz1983

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    The ideas are there but thats about all atm ... will hopefully change soon.

    Cheers for the advice.