The levels are really uneven, the bass stabs sound the same and overall the clip sounds really fragmented, one things happening, then another thing, then a third thing, without anything gluing them together.
I like the soundscape and edits though, but I'd rework the arrangement and bring the bongos (or whatever) out a bit, judging by the vibe you're building I think it would benefit the track if it was driven b those tribal drums, if you catch my drift.