My first tune

[Hi-Def]

Hi-Def - Martello
Rolling/liquid dnb
Easy peeps. finally got round to making something which resembles a tune! i want your feedback please! i think theres alot that needs doing to it but i dont know what, like a lead melody, samples, new synth, opinions please?!
https://soundcloud.com/hi-def/martello

 

[Kopacetic]

Pretty good, even though I can't hear the sub bass because I'm playing it through my iPhone speakers.

 

[Hi-Def]

thanks for the kind words!