My First Tune - Midnight Drive

[Alexi]

Alright this is my first post in this section and was just looking for some feedback on my first full song 'Midnight Drive'

Listen to it on
myspace.com/alexidnb

I've had Reason for about 2 weeks and just wanted to see what everyone thought of my first effort.

It's a kinda liquid atmospheric type tune, and all your views would be much appreciated

Cheers, Alexi

 

[Sammy Dexcell]

not a bad tune for ur first go man, stop me if im wrong but i cant help thinkin its a midi inserted with your selection of sounds sorry to think that but if its not u got most the arrangement right (string wise) just need the drums to be bigger, more layers and bass line to me sounded a bit wierd wiv the high end guitar thing, maybe jut put a low pass filter on your b and it might sound better, other than that i cant really say much more but i would defo be happy if i made this after 2weeks of production lol keep at it mate!

safe

 

[Alexi]

not a bad tune for ur first go man, stop me if im wrong but i cant help thinkin its a midi inserted with your selection of sounds sorry to think that but if its not u got most the arrangement right (string wise) just need the drums to be bigger, more layers and bass line to me sounded a bit wierd wiv the high end guitar thing, maybe jut put a low pass filter on your b and it might sound better, other than that i cant really say much more but i would defo be happy if i made this after 2weeks of production lol keep at it mate!

safe

yeah it is, i've got a midi keyboard but once it plays the note it just holds it on and i cant fix it even afta going into a yamaha shop

but cheers for the advice i'll do another mixdown with the stuff you suggested, cheers mate