my first tune, done diddly doodily

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by dj.jason, Jan 8, 2004.

  1. dj.jason

    dj.jason skeyemountain.com

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    hey hey, waht a way to post our first tune, post no.100

    this is just the first few min of a tune myself and ozone(turbine productions) are workin on. its in the early stages, as we havnt done any beat building and shit like that, and also the vocal isnt finished in the break either.
    but check it any ways and let me know your thoughts, i think we're on the right path for sure :missile:

    http://skeyemountain.com/1-14.rm

    only have it as a real audio file as yet, like i said its not finished by a long shot :pimp:

    enjoy

    props to ozone for his relentless work!!! BOH
     
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  2. connecta

    connecta Broken Recordings

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    listening now!

    intro...

    32kbit quality wohoow :zest:

    some more should happen in the intro

    vocal = put lil reverb or something on it

    set some effects after the vocal



    main...

    like the idea, cant hear much when it comes 2 stabs or hihats, cuz they are all cracked up on 32kbps

    do more drum variations...

    it will be a good trancy tune if u keep workin on it !!!

    Ps: nexttime post in a better quallity like 128 or sumn :whipem:


    ez!
     
  3. dj.jason

    dj.jason skeyemountain.com

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    thanx for the comments mate

    yea the sound quality is pretty bad, but like i said its in the early stages still

    some work on the breaks and drums is being done now, so should be soundin better soon
     
  4. jay walker

    jay walker 1/2 of Passive/Aggressive

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    As work in progress, its got all the elements - as connecta said, the quality makes it hard to get the total vibe of the tune.

    Get a higher version posted soon bro ;)

    For a first tune though - Major props! Boh!! :gslayer:
     
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    dj.jason skeyemountain.com

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    thanx for the comments bro, respectz, looking forward to ya new one with bad ace ;)

    here is a 128kbit sample, the quality is far better, still early stages though

    http://skeyemountain.com/newone.mp3
     
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    Aright man listening now

    Nice sounds. Well put together. Start Trekky sample fits well. Like the strings as well, and the backwards drums. DSrums could be a bit punchier, and maybe vary a little more. They sound drum machiney as well, what you using ? maybe try using some breaks. BAss is good, a little clean perhaps, bit of Da Tube on it (VST plugin) what you writing stuff on ? If this is your fisrt ever tvery good trak man, spec !

    cuts out a little suddenly!

    :resick:
     
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    dj.jason skeyemountain.com

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    thanx paradigm

    yea this is our first tune together, i use cubase and reason
    i work with ozone who is very good at what he does.
    the reason the beats are like this and it cuts out quick is because its far from finished :)
    :lol_board
     
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  8. Dexterity

    Dexterity New Member

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    Nice Jason....
    I like the runnin/rollin bass kicks
    Very good vocal sample there, and the bass is fuckin CLEAN. Very nice man. The reese floats nice over the bassline. For an unfinished track it's sounding nice. Once you add some more elements I could see this sounding very nice 8O

    Very good first tune man I'm impressed
     
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    BeatMech 101 BeatMech 101

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    holy crap jase, this has potential to be a best seller... sick beats, nice flow... great break down, and i love the way the vocal spins down, then bang, straight into bassline, nice work.... when this is finished i'm sure it'll impress... great ideas, this is rockin...
    Cheers mate..
    ..JAISE....
    How'd your bday set go on saturday night???
     
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    dj.jason skeyemountain.com

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    thanks for the comments dex and jaise, respectz
     
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    dj.jason skeyemountain.com

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    sorry guys had to pull this down for a bit, it needs more work
    ez
     
  12. subtek

    subtek conspiracy project

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    bring that beat back mate

    half recovered, i wanna hear it!!!

    get in touch !!!

    :welcome:
     
  13. Bad Ace

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    o_O jus got round to listenin to this.like it very much but im not too sure havin that vocal as it is....may be put an effect onnit instead of jus pitchin it down.love the bassline though man...........may b u want sum 1 to work on a rmx?!?!? :rolleyes:
     
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    dj.jason skeyemountain.com

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    thanx for the comments mate, yea the vocal is a bit plain, i was keen to leave it as is, but i might play with it a bit. once we done the whole thing we can chat bout that rmx
     
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    Bad Ace Close2Death

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    wicked...........catch up soon! :cool:
     
  16. subtek

    subtek conspiracy project

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    well... now that's a very fine start!!!!!

    continue, i mean it...!!!
    :mr_cool:

    mash up the place! :twitch:
     
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    Cube www.exegene.com

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    word
    :miss_rep:

    it was gnarly.
     
  18. Bad Ace

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    BUMP!! b.a.i rmx comin soon! :rolleyes: