my first track

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  1. dnbduke

    dnbduke Member

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    my first attempt feedback appreciated

    k fixed
     
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    subprime Dysjoint VIP Junglist

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    Is your track private
     
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    think i fixed it
     
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    intro is ok. too boring cos its far too long. add some more elements into it. some good ideas. ya need to practise on your mixdown and EQing ability. they seem to be a bit all over the place!
     
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    thanks for the advice. like i said its my first track so im really shit at mixdowns and that kind of stuff still haven't had any practice with it
     
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    Hi,
    I am not the best critic but I think your volumes are way to high. Try turning them down some. Also, your first song is way better than my first drum and bass song.
     
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    but on the positive side your beat is chilled as a cucumber, sounding really confident. good work on the melodies with the strings. the bass is too high in pitch and in volume and quite possibly in cutoff so just lower all of that and watch its bollocks grow.
     
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    safe man, thanks for the advice ill look into editing it