My first track (slightly different)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by 37H4N, Sep 12, 2010.

  1. 37H4N

    37H4N Member

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    Iv changed a few things on the track. Sub bass stil needs alot of work but please comment. I've made the tune on laptop speakers as my headphone jack is dead. So thats why I cant really do much with the subbass. Thanks......:)


    http://soundcloud.com/37h4n/uno-take-two
     
  2. dexter

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    if your laptop speakers are anything like mine, then good effort on whatever you make.

    the kick is far too quiet, needs to be either turned up or get some boom in there, the bass is a bit loud overall, but i guess the whole tune is not bad, especially since it was made on laptop speakers, get some speakers asap
     
  3. ManuForti

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    youve turned my half decent headphones into laptop speakers !!! youv got the ideas anyway but i think you need to get some headphones mate :)

    edit.... or speakers ^^
     
  4. Thin and crispy

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    get that kick layered and turn it up :p