MY FIRST TRACK! krispy - drink to you

[Krispy]

Hey everyone, so I have finished producing my first track. It's not a drum and bass track, its more of an electro house style track but what the heck, have a listen and let me know what you think, any feedback is appreciated. Thanks everyone

http://soundcloud.com/krispy/drink-to-you

 

[Mr Fletch]

Congrats on completing your first track!

Sounds well produced, bassline is nice and groovy, which fits with the style of music. I like the breaks with the cheeky vocals, although would've liked them to be a little clearer, and maybe dropped once or twice along with the beat. Overall I think it could've done with a little something extra to help it progress, maybe a slight change after the second drop but thats just personal taste.

Overall a very tidy track, that sounds well put together, especially for your first track!

 

[Krispy]

hey thanks man
i know exactly what you mean about introducing that vocals a bit earlier in the track to kind of ease their way into the song
and i also understand what you mean about adding a little more variation after the second drop, maybe an additional sound or change in bassline

thanks for the input

 

[subprime]

I like this. First track, bloody hell......;

 

[DJError]

sounds sick mate, like your voice samples as well

 

[ChestOr]

nice work, but I'm missing some Hats/cymbals

 

[Fishy:)]

Not really my style, but nice work for a first track!

 

[Krispy]

thanks for the input everyone