MY FIRST TRACK! krispy - drink to you

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Krispy, Feb 11, 2010.

  1. Krispy

    Krispy Member

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    Hey everyone, so I have finished producing my first track. It's not a drum and bass track, its more of an electro house style track but what the heck, have a listen and let me know what you think, any feedback is appreciated. Thanks everyone

    http://soundcloud.com/krispy/drink-to-you
     
  2. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Congrats on completing your first track!

    Sounds well produced, bassline is nice and groovy, which fits with the style of music. I like the breaks with the cheeky vocals, although would've liked them to be a little clearer, and maybe dropped once or twice along with the beat. Overall I think it could've done with a little something extra to help it progress, maybe a slight change after the second drop but thats just personal taste.

    Overall a very tidy track, that sounds well put together, especially for your first track!
     
  3. Krispy

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    hey thanks man
    i know exactly what you mean about introducing that vocals a bit earlier in the track to kind of ease their way into the song
    and i also understand what you mean about adding a little more variation after the second drop, maybe an additional sound or change in bassline

    thanks for the input :)
     
  4. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    I like this. First track, bloody hell......;
     
  5. DJError

    DJError AKA Error

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    sounds sick mate, like your voice samples as well
     
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    nice work, but I'm missing some Hats/cymbals
     
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    Not really my style, but nice work for a first track!
     
  8. Krispy

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    thanks for the input everyone :)