My first song - Beginning

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by ahiggins4898, Sep 28, 2013.

  1. ahiggins4898

    ahiggins4898 New Member

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    Not bad. Sounds more like heavy metal than anything else
     
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    Is that a good thing or a bad one
     
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    Hate to say this, cause I'm definitely up for more people making DnB, but it's not good at all.
    How old are you?
    Did you mean for this to be a DnB tune?
    How did you make this?
     
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    ahiggins4898 New Member

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    I'm 15
    I was just trying to make something that sounds good
    I used Garageband
     
  6. whiterob81

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    It's not a bad thing. I'm a big heavy metal fan. This is really good for a first effort and definitely way better than the first efforts I would have made. You only have to look at my past posts here to see that. You might just need read up a bit more on music theory and it's no harm watching some tutorial videos on YouTube or the like but you'll get there. You're off to a fairly promising start
     
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    Also, look at song structure and think about the type of music you'd like to create. Learning how to produce is kind of like learning another musical instrument
     
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    Hi mate, you are on way this really a great job. I like you to continue working on it and one day you will be expert. Also there are many experts who can use the soundcloud automator to promote their music so, its the way you can also get the more audience on your soundcloud page. Cheers!
     
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