My First REAL track.

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by JAHLA, Feb 3, 2012.

  1. JAHLA

    JAHLA New Member

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    Hey guys,
    here is a track I've been working on for a few days... tell me what you think! Is this good for a 16 year old? :oscar:


     
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    your kick and snare are very very nice, they really set the mood right in the beginning.
    in the intro and break the track is a bit empty, in the intro it's acceptable because some tracks start off empty and then slowly fill up. but the break seems shallow, you could add some backgroud noises and a soundscape.
    and I think adding some crashes and reversed crashes in the transitions would make them better.
     
  3. mugatu

    mugatu Verva Music

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    What I think too. Keep it interesting.
     
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    JAHLA New Member

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    Thanks for the feedback guys I'll work on it! (y)
     
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    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Wooww nice sounds, a lot better than when I was 16 hahaa loll.. xD Yeah mate just keep going this way, have you made the synths yourself?