My first ever track - called "ill give you pleasure"

not bad man,
has something minimal an i can feel the vibe you were goin for :) kinda like your hi synth btw, minimal but chilled out :)
but needs some variety :)
cheers
 
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Might want a pad or something at the intro bit. And some variation with the drums with be good, like some hat shuffles and stuff here and there, random rim hits etc etc. I think you might need to layer the snare, soundsl ike you only have one snare hit going on there. So lots to build on :D
Always interesting hearing peoples first tunes, I still remember mine...:D
 
Might want a pad or something at the intro bit. And some variation with the drums with be good, like some hat shuffles and stuff here and there, random rim hits etc etc. I think you might need to layer the snare, soundsl ike you only have one snare hit going on there. So lots to build on :D
Always interesting hearing peoples first tunes, I still remember mine...:D

I have like 4-5 snares :( shit drums! lool

Yeah needs pads + synths but i'm not so good at them atm...

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Just went back and listened to my first version of this tune, the drums are so much more puncher. Fail lol
 
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