My first ever track - called "ill give you pleasure"

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  1. DJNitrousUK

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    not bad man,
    has something minimal an i can feel the vibe you were goin for :) kinda like your hi synth btw, minimal but chilled out :)
    but needs some variety :)
    cheers
     
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    Might want a pad or something at the intro bit. And some variation with the drums with be good, like some hat shuffles and stuff here and there, random rim hits etc etc. I think you might need to layer the snare, soundsl ike you only have one snare hit going on there. So lots to build on :D
    Always interesting hearing peoples first tunes, I still remember mine...:D
     
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    I have like 4-5 snares :( shit drums! lool

    Yeah needs pads + synths but i'm not so good at them atm...

    ---------- Post added at 19:46 ---------- Previous post was at 19:39 ----------

    Just went back and listened to my first version of this tune, the drums are so much more puncher. Fail lol