my first drum and bass track

[fperry]

check it out,

http://www.sendspace.com/file/d4rdzj

post comment.please.

 

[krease]

need a longer clip really to make judgment.

 

[fperry]

here longer.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/qi89ih

or need MUCH longer ???

 

[logikz]

its shows alot of promise, sturdy 2step beats and the growl is mean. but its more of a 2 bar loop than a tune, so an entire tune is preferrable
my first dnb tune was also my first tune ever, it sounded like sucka mcs from run dmc in dnb tempo, i couldnt even figure out why the thing was 64 long

 

[krease]

it does sond cool as it stands, id personally throw in some bass switch ups (even if its just pitching them higher or lower an octave) but thats just my production method.

 

[fperry]

thnx !