My first dnb tune =D

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by McJoggbo, Apr 15, 2008.

  1. McJoggbo

    McJoggbo because bass matters

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    im new to making dnb but ive been producing grime for about 18months, dubstep & house for about 6 months.

    its a remix of dj premiers 'peace of mine'. its a rough mix with no effects as of yet apart from basic reverbs and echos.

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    http://rapidshare.de/files/39131005/DJ_Premier_-_Peace_Of_Mine__Clement_Wilson_DnB_Remix_.mp3.html
    http://www.sendspace.com/file/4lfoqo
    http://www.megaupload.com/?d=1APQEAWX
    http://www.zshare.net/audio/10597801ec5f9610/

    feedback greatly appreciated. even if it is absolute garbage lol.
     
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    Nutek movement junglist

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    i thought it sounded shabby at first, but when it dropped i was pretty impressed, however i think you need to work on the hi hats and the kick drum as the kick sounds a bit trancey, the drums sound better when theyre with the rest of the track but they still still need some work, nice one for your first track though (y)
     
  3. McJoggbo

    McJoggbo because bass matters

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    thanks for the feedback bruv, lets just hope i dont get lazy and abandon it lol.
     
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    Reference fair shout.

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    :L you shoulda sampled the advert in polaris world
     
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    sinr AZ Junglist souljah

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    KEEP UP DA GOOD WERK M8!!!

    i just started fucken w/ dnb aswell (producing).... so, i feel ur pain bruva!!

    but u did well
     
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    McJoggbo because bass matters

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    it wasnt actually called polaris world until way after it was finished. the reason being. the sample i from 'polaris - zero 7' or something. it had nothing to do with the advert at the time lol.