hey man, the musical ideas in this are all there and the ideas are good. but the technical aspect of your production is going to take a lot of work. = mixdowns, that kick and snare need to pop out the mix and push the synths back in the mix to be a bit more subtle. Always try and get away with as much sub bass as you can as well. DNB mixdowns are the most demanding of any genre in my opinion but once you get a hang of how to compress and make things sit tightly then you will have some good music man!! keep at it! eventually finding a way to weave everything together! gave you a follow