Drum & Bass my first dnb track, ( i'm 15, check it out, give feedback!!

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  1. androidofficial

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    posted this in the wrong section. its good, needs a bigger drop and change. i dont think you made the drums yourself though if it is your first track. if you tell me other wise i wont believe you.
     
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    Drums are from that premade song (maybe somewhere else, but i've heard then here) that comes with FL, ''Clean vs dirty'' it's called if I'm not mistaken.
    Sounds rather good to me but it may be due to the fact that I love both that song and the premade song above. ^^
    That pause tho at 1:23 or so seems 2 long, u might wanna trim that down a bit or add some reverb to the sound before so it's not just silence for 3-4 sec.

    Anyway if this is rly your 1. work then imo u made a rly good job ;)
     
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    not bad mate! you might wana spend more than an hour on your tracks tho
     
  5. androidofficial

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    it's premade in fruiyloops, i'm still trying to make that myself, but it's hard :p ty

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    thankyou ;D well i just started on makin a new tune & i will keep your tips in mind :D

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    ofcourse, but i was just givin it a try to make dnb, now i'll put a lot of time in it ;D ty
     
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    I think he meant all of your tracks. But honestly I liked the mixdown a lot. You should definitely up the tempo and use the fruity slicer tool. If you play around you'll figure it all out.
     
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    the piano sounds very bland, try adding reverb, a lot of it to...
     
  8. androidofficial

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    oh, yeah ok