Drum & Bass My first DnB song

Discussion in 'Drum & Bass' started by RunningWolf, Oct 12, 2012.

  1. RunningWolf

    RunningWolf New Member

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    Hey guys, i just finished my first liquid DnB song. My personal rate is 6/10, its not bad, melodies are cool, but production is kinda awful in my opinion. Here, listen:

    http://soundcloud.com/runningwolf-1/on-comets-wings

    So what do you think? What should i change, what should i remake, remove or add. Please help guys i want more knowledge :)
     
  2. jsmith89

    jsmith89 Hmph..... silly...

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    if you're rating your own stuff 6/10 i really dont think you should be posting your stuff online. why the rush? work on it until it's more up to your own standards i think.

    my laptop speakers are fucked so i cant listen btw :)
     
  3. RunningWolf

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    I didn't rate it by my standards, i am very satisfied with my first work. 6/10 rate is given when compared to the other incredible pieces out here. I just wanted to hear from you guys, as i said, what should i fix, on what should i pay attention next time, what should be removed and so on... I just want some advices that's all :)