My First D&B Original Track ! :) (Liquid D&B)

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  1. parsons19

    parsons19 Active Member

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    Hey Everyone,

    Here is my first D&B Track. Please give me some feedback, let me know if it something I should keep doing :)



    It was for a piece of School Work. I wanted to make it personal to me so I added an improvised Guitar part. Let me know how it sounds to your ears!

    Jordan
     
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    JHSE23 the yen

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    not sounding bad mate. keep at it, if you carry on you could be sick in a few years
     
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    Thanks very much man :) Glad you liked it!
     
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    miszt BASSFACE Royale

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    nice sounds, good beat, great guitar, that you playing? good stuff! although its too loud in the mix, more variation in the beats and bass will help things along, great tho for a first track, nice vibes
     
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    Thanks very much for the response man :) Yeah its me playing, Guitar is my main instrument but I like to have a fiddle with production and stuff to :)

    I have been looking into some tutorials on the internet for Logic and when I get back to school after exams and summer I can start some new stuff, I will have a fiddle with more beats and work on bass like you suggested ;)
     
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    firstly, good first go at the track.

    secondly. to embed the soundcloud link, just click the little soundcloud logo on the bar at the top of the comment box (that has image, Link, Bold, Underline ect) and two brackets will appear >>
     
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    Thanks man :)

    Sorted now :D
     
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    Wow man how long 've you been producing?? Sounds very well for a first track! And that guitar play is nice man...
     
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    Sry, 2 random and repetitive for me, dunno what all the fuss is about...
     
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    miszt BASSFACE Royale

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    its called Encourgment, its what people do when they want to help other people learn sumthing they love doing.
     
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    prettyherb - thanks very much man :) Ummm, I had played around Logic before but only tried it properly with this song so maybe a week or so worth of proper experience? haha

    Cycloplyze - No worries man, each to their own :) I will take notes of your comments for the future :)
     
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    nice bass man;P but the track is sounding very empty. especially the drums;P u need more drums
     
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    Sry, didn't see much of that, guess that's why... and to be a little more constructive, it's not bad, wouldn't even said anything if it weren't for the huge rush to this. Ur 16 and it's great if this is ur 1. work, but it's basicly a 2 channel song without the drums and guitar. Im all for encouragement, and parsons19, it's nothing personal, but imo there should be a difference between encouragement and just stroking some1 on the head.
     
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    Thanks for all the feedback :)
     
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    great stuff, beef the drums up a bit i would say, the sub rolls off nice.
     
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    The guitar is sweeet, the track sounds kinda empty tho. Still much better than my tunes :D
     
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    Thanks both of you :)

    underspawn, any of your tracks online? I would be happy to listen in return ;) Same for anyone else with tracks :)
     
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    Just posted my 3rd finished tune in the track review section, feel free to check it out.
     
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