DnB My first attempt (feedback please)

[bartman2468]

This is my first attempt. It's something I just started, kinda threw it together. Not even close to finished. I would love feedback, I really need it. Advice?

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Foscx%2Fcircles-preview

 

[st. alexander]

Sounds good so far. I would only say throw on a harder beat on top of the one you've got. Hope you finish it.

 

[Mr_DnB]

Sounds clean. There is surely enough space for improvement in this track! Keep working on this