My first actual tune

[DnBPeanut]

This is one of the first songs I have created in FL Studio 8, Im still kind of a noob though. Comments and criticism are welcome. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Y_t0OqDYIM

 

[Zeal]

Does it drop right at the start where drums come in?

If so i cant really make out the bass that well.

Good effort with the leads and such, maybe a tad random sounding

but for ur first tune thats not a bad effort at all man

 

[vickvega]

not bad at all for first tune -keep tryin new shit bro and youll get there