DnB My First 2 Orginal Mixes: Critiques Welcomed.

[n0x23]

I received Ableton as a gift about 6-7 months ago, after diving in head first, here are my first two complete songs.
Any and all critiques and constructive criticism are welcomed.

[video=youtube_share;ZeBoOVC5oDs]http://youtu.be/ZeBoOVC5oDs[/video]

[video=youtube_share;m5nQahH2FLU]http://youtu.be/m5nQahH2FLU[/video]


Ps.I'm completely open to any and all critique and criticism, that is the only way to improve, which I'm hoping to do.

Thanks in advance.

 

[Liquid State]

Soundcloud link please :/.....

 

[Cold Quake]

When you choose to use youtube, at least put some attractive pictures.

 

[n0x23]

My Soundcloud account is acting janky, but here's the first song. I'll upload the other song.

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fn0x23%2Funtil-i-feel-again_n0x23

When you choose to use youtube, at least put some attractive pictures.

Should I add some Henti?